閒話少敘，咱們開始，首先是背景+申請結果：
1. 背景與申請
1.1 自己申請總結
本科瀋陽建築土木，碩士哈爾濱工業大學建築與土木工程。本科班級第一，碩士也是前三。託福一戰90二戰105。GMAT720。
碩士申博士。
推薦信是本科班主任＋實習領導＋碩士期間任課老師。
文書是自己團隊潤色的。從頭到尾除了申請費沒多花過錢。
申請澳洲和香港為主。
拿到了悉尼大學和阿德萊德大學的csc邀請信。後來不打算申了就沒用了。悉尼大學是可靠度，阿德萊德大學是高性能混凝土。
香港這邊有港科大和港城大的，地產金融建造管理這方面的。這個準備去。明年一月入學。
澳門大學拿到了結構檢測方向的博士offer。這個就不去了。。
還有一個悉尼科技大學，一開始老師給了一個csc邀請信，後來自己申學校全獎給了conditional offer。結構檢測。不過也應該不考慮去了。
正經填系統的都過了。之前還跟港大，港理工，普度，康涅狄格的老師Skype過，跟港中大深圳的胡老師面對面聊過，毛老師電話聊過。但是這幾個學校我沒有正式填寫系統。所以也不用談過不過。
1.2 擇校選擇
擇校標準：三個硬性條件——城市，排名，學科專業。
城市：世界級大城市。我的本碩都在中國二線副省級城市，有點呆夠了，想去大城市看看。比如東京香港紐約洛杉巴黎，悉尼也可以算上，包括大阪，京都，新加坡，墨爾本，馬德里，柏林，慕尼黑，也是可以接受的。但是你讓我去阿德萊德，這我就算了吧。排除阿德萊德。
排名：比我的碩士母校高100名以上，QS THE ARWU USNEWS任何一個榜高HIT 100+即可。所以澳門大學被排除了。
學科專業：能不學土木就不學了。如果沒有地產金融 綠色建築這種offer，在幾個土木的offer中，無疑，悉尼大學最合適。可是既然來了地產金融，那就沒辦法了。悉尼大學遺憾出局。同理悉尼科技也是再見了。
就剩下了HK雙雄。所以就定在HK了。
還有一個隱藏條件——讀博自力更生不跟家裡要錢。
這樣的看來，HK雙雄也是極為核算的。而澳洲的幾個offer，在“錢景”上不盡如人意。
1.3 獎學金金額
澳洲：阿德萊德和悉尼大學的CSC是國家出錢，學校免學費。如果拿到的話我國一個月給1700澳元的獎學金。不分城市。悉尼科技大學的全獎沒記錯的話是cover學費+26682澳元/年。
香港：政府獎學金HKPFS(還是HKFPS來著，忘了)20000港幣/月，普通獎學金16000港幣/月。普通獎學金具體根據學校會有不同，比如城大是16200，理工是16400，港大是16330，中文印象中是15800 。總之都是16000上下幾百塊浮動。
澳門：濠江學者計劃是4年100萬澳門元。和港府獎學金基本一個價位，普通獎學金12000-14000澳門元不等。
港中深：之前文章有講過，大概是5000/月的生活費+cover學費。cover的方式有多種不細說了。
美帝：全獎聽說是cover學費+2400刀/月。但是我沒申過也不瞭解。CSC是學費免除+2000/1800/1700 刀 per month。分地區的。比如紐約應該是2000，而田納西，印第安納，麻省，應該是1700/月。
1.4 其他申請情況
1.4.1 自家學妹
學妹夕夜：本科非211，學分績84但是有一科掛科，省政府獎學金，外文論文兩篇但是是第四作者，省部級及以上獎勵5-10項，雅思6.5（7+7+6+5.5）.
拿到英國一些一二百名開外的大學的人力資源master offer，考上了本校的學碩，還有香港城市大學建造管理master offer. 最終選擇cityu建造管理。
1.4.2 外校熟人
LX：本科211碩士985，土木工程，本科專業第一92+，碩士82.3，託福105+GRE325，獎項不清楚，碩士有一篇中文EI. 南加大全獎被拒，目前有阿爾伯塔和西安大略的全獎，申了普度的CSC。
MG：本碩985（一個學校），均分都是85左右，土木工程，託福94+GRE317，UIUC沒消息，德州奧斯丁被拒，莫納什CSC offer，米蘭理工全獎。
ZY：本碩211（不是一個學校），本科90.6+碩士83，機械工程，雅思7+GRE322，新加坡國立和南洋理工沒消息，墨爾本理工全獎，西澳大利亞大學csc，香港理工全獎。
KOP：本科非211碩士澳洲八大，人力資源行政管理類，本科績點3.67碩士3.35（她說是換算的我也不知道咋換算的），雅思7已經失效（在英語國家讀書可以不考英語考試），香港中文沒消息，香港城大全獎offer班（但是沒到16000），日本的一個大學的全獎offer，本校的CSC offer。
1.4.3 網絡論壇
本科211，託福105+gre317，測繪工程，均分88+，申PhD，明尼蘇達雙城，德州奧斯丁被拒，俄亥俄PhD和代爾夫特理工master無獎學金，亞利桑那PhD全獎，卡爾加里master全獎。
本科985，託福105沒寫GRE，土木工程，均分4.1/5.0，卡梅master無獎。
本科國內985與國外大學合辦的學校，碩士UIUC，經濟類專業，本科績點3.2+碩士績點3.8，103+319，密歇根，匹茲堡，威斯康星被拒，南加大PhD 小獎，康涅狄格，渥太華PhD 無獎，阿爾伯塔全獎。
本科985 學分績3.77，碩士國科大，學分績3.65.本科信管碩士管科，104+325，羅格斯大學公共政策PhD 全獎 offer。
雙非本科，學分績80，土木專業，跨專業申請建築系master，拿到曼大和謝菲的建築學一年制碩士，雅思6.5。
本科985，學分績89+，專業前4%，數理統計大數據類專業，申請master，拿到牛津offer，倫敦政經+蘇黎世聯邦理工+帝國理工+倫敦政經+UCL 無獎offer。
本科985，雅思7+gmat730，學分績3.8/4.0，金融系，申請新加坡國立金融PhD被拒，拿到新國立的量化金融和金融工程master offer.
2.套詞信
2.1 撰寫依據
我覺得套磁信最重要的是“建立自己與導師之間的聯繫”和“介紹自己”。此外我也沒啥套路，我也不會寫長難句，也不愛寫多。放上幾個套詞成功的案例（成功指的是老師邀請遠程面試，或者加了微信，或者學校給了offer，或者給了CSC邀請信）。其實我很懶，以下郵件內容大部分都是......
特別鳴謝谷歌翻譯的大力支持！
2.2 港校導師
最近的一篇文章的主角，港大商科老師（沒申但是面試了）：
Good evening Prof.~！ I am a master student in Harbin institute of technology. You could call me Jun. I plan to apply for HKU, which is a dream for me since I went to college. My undergraduate study direction is civil engineering and master's project is structural engineering.
I know that the HKU has a strong background in business and management. I am interested in your studying area (such as mathematical modeling). During my undergraduate years, I have won many awards in national or provincial mathematical modeling completions, and I really like the idea of "solving practical problems by mathematical methods", especially solving financial engineering problems.
Attachment is my CV and certificates. I will graduate in 2019.1. If your team want to hire some PhD students, I hope to apply for your team in 2019.
Best regards
港科大土木系老師（沒申但是面試了）：
Good afternoon Dr~ ! I am a master student in Harbin institute of technology. You could call me Jun.I plan to apply for HKUST at this year,which is a dream for me since I went to college.My undergraduate study direction is structural engineering and master's project is earthquake engineering.
In July 2017, I attended the 8th National Graduate Summer School in Southeast University.At the summer school, I made an academic report entitled "the most unfavorable vibration selection and sorting".At the same time, I saw your lecture on the website of the college of civil engineering, southeast university.I'm very interested in your lecture "ZXXXXX",and I hope to learn about BIM, project management direction.
Attachment is my CV, transcripts and certificates.My recent TOEFL score is 90(Oct.2017)
Best wishes
未來導師（全獎）：
Good afternoon Dr.~！ I am a master student in Harbin institute of technology. You could call me Jun. My undergraduate study direction is civil engineering and master's project is structural engineering.
My father works in agricultural bank of China and I have studied civil engineering 6 years, we are interested in the relationship between housing boom and bank credit. My father thinks highly of your paper "~~~~" , so he encouraged me to send you an email to ask about the admissions.
Attachment is my CV and application form. I will graduate in 2019.1. If your team want to hire some PhD students, I hope to apply for your team in 2019.
Best regards
2.3 澳洲套詞
悉尼大學土木（CSC邀請信）：
Hi,Dr. ~! I am a master of civil engineering, Harbin Institute of Technology, Xu Hejun. I will graduate next year ,and plan to apply for PhD. The research direction of my master's thesis is determined : SSSSSS(earthquake engineering). I think it has a certain relationship with your research direction.Therefore,I hope I can successfully applied to the SydneyU PhD.
PS: My TOEFL is 90 and Attachment is my CV, transcripts and certificates.
Best wishes
悉尼科技大學土木（校獎）：
Good evening Prof.~！I am a master student in Harbin institute of technology. You could call me Jun. Last week, HIT sent documents about the CSC application of Australian, I know that the UTS has a strong background in civil engineering. I saw your message on the Internet and I am interested in your studying area (such as Structural Dynamic). I have studied some related courses such as earthquake engineering, structural dynamics etc. So I send this e-mail to you to express my wanting.
My undergraduate study direction is structural engineering and master's project is also structural engineering. I think my academic background has certain relation with your research direction.
Attachment is my CV and transcripts. I got my first TOEFL some days ago, it was 90 points(reach enrollment requirement) and I think it has some improvement in future. I would like to apply CSC and choose to enroll in 18Fall or 19spring.
阿德萊德大學（CSC邀請信）
Dear Dr.~
I am a master of civil engineering, Harbin Institute of Technology, JUN. I will apply for PhD in 2017. I am engaged in seismic engineering research at Harbin Institute of Technology . The research direction of my master's thesis was determined : SSSSS. I think it has relationship with your research direction(structural resilience)and I have followed your ResearchGate Profile.So I send the mail to express my willingness to apply PhD.
Attachment is my CV, transcripts and certificates.And I have tested TOEFL 90 in Oct.2017
Looking forward to meeting you in Adelaide!
Best regards
2.4 美帝試水
康涅狄格土木（沒申但是邀請面試了，當時已經確定去HK，婉拒之）：
Good morning Prof.~! I am a master student in Harbin institute of technology, China. You could call me Jun. Your studying area attracts me(such as resilience). My undergraduate study direction is civil engineering and master's project is earthquake engineering. Some students in our group are studying the resilience of building structures to earthquake, so I think my academic background has certain relation with your research direction.
Attachment is my CV . I got my first TOEFL some days ago, it was 105 points and GMAT is 720. I will graduate in Jan.2019. If your team want to hire some PhD students, I hope to apply for your team in 2019！
Best wishes
佛羅里達建管（沒申但是加了微信並且聊了很多）
Good evening Prof.~! I am a master student in Harbin institute of technology. You could call me Jun. I plan to apply for UF, which is a dream for me since I went to college. My undergraduate study direction is structural engineering and master's project is earthquake engineering.
I know that the UF has a strong background in engineering management and see your message on the Internet. I am interested in your studying area (such as BIM and VR). So I send this e-mail to you.
Attachment is my CV and my current TOEFL is 90. I will graduate in December 2018. If your team want to hire some students, I hope to apply for your doctor's admission in 2019.
Best wishes and Happy Chinese New Year!
3. 總結
以上就是工作室2018屆申請情況的大盤點。內容之詳實，之全面，我想沒有別的帖子/經驗/推文，能與之抗衡。希望可以幫助到大家！歡迎大家多多點擊底部廣告！
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