高分作文三要素：審題、句法、結構，這三點可以說是完美地濃縮了歷年考研英語寫作真題考試大綱的要求。
一、句法：寫作≠長難句
歷年的考研高分範文有很多不同的類型，有一些文章從頭到尾幾乎都是簡單句，但是語法清晰、詞組的搭配和短語使用得地道、用詞精準，並且在邏輯上有觀點、有舉例、有結論、前後有呼應，圖畫中該描述的點描述到了、也沒有走題。這種作文，以英語一大作文20分滿分為例，可以拿到14分-16分。
也有一些文章全是長難句，寫得跟The Economists（《經濟學人》）一樣，這些同學的語言功底深厚，比如本科是英語專業，跨考別的專業，在英語這一門有得天獨厚的優勢，因為他們不用太花時間和精力在英語上。但其他同學就不一樣了，寫作成為了非英文專業同學的最大難題。
其實大家都存在一個誤區，覺得在寫作版塊拿高分必須寫出非常多的長難句。但以考試大綱所給的範文為例，每年英語大綱官方解析都會給各種不同類型的範文，我們會發現絕大多數含有長難句的範文，整篇作文以240個詞為例的話，也只有2-3句長難句而已，其他全為簡單句。所以，你只需要寫出1-2句可以撐門面的長難句，但注意，剩餘其他的部分用表達地道的簡單句填充即可。
還有一個重要的點，學會用簡單詞，因為這會體現你對語言的掌控力，會寫複雜詞只能體現一個人的單詞量，但寫作版塊從根本上考察的是語言能力，你越是能用簡單地道的詞彙表達出複雜的含義，越能體現出寫作水平的高級，再在其中穿插1-2個“大詞”，就會是一篇非常完美的考研作文，給考官們留下好的印象。
二、結構：三段論（what/why/how）
1、what——描述漫畫和圖表
2、why——分析原因/印象，擺出觀點、論據支撐（最多2點：內+外）
內因：找自己
外因：找社會、媒體、風俗習慣、文化背景、法律漏洞等等
比如：
1.話題：整容
內因：缺乏自信
外因：媒體過度宣揚顏值即正義，
2.話題：老人倒在路上沒人扶
內因：自私，怕麻煩
外因：媒體給老人扣上“碰瓷”的帽子
3.話題：汙染環境
內因：事不關己高高掛起，自掃門前雪
外因：法律對汙染環境行為的懲罰不夠
……
3、how——提建議，首尾呼應
說了這麼多方法論，具體看一些考研高分作文的片段，一起感受審題、句法、結構這三點要素是如何在高分作文中體現和運用的。
（1）審題：抓住圖中的人或事（特別是人的某種行為）進行反思
2011年英語一大作文
內因：事不關己高高掛起，自掃門前雪
外因：法律對汙染環境行為的懲罰不夠
主題：缺乏責任心、道德低下、法律不嚴苛
（2）句法：寫出滿分級別長句
In China, many undergraduates feel helpless to choose their goal.
(1) 替換many（量化）：In China, 40% more or less of undergraduates feel helpless to choose their goal.
(2) 替換choose their goal（具體化）：In China, 40% more or less of undergraduates feel helpless in the face of whether to graduate for a job or to pursue a higher degree.
(3) 升級全句：It is unveiled by a recent survey that in China, 40% more or less of undergraduates feel helpless in the face of whether to graduate for a job or to pursue a higher degree.
(4) 加修飾，拉長句子：It is unveiled by a recent survey initiated by China Daily that in China, 40% more or less of undergraduates investigated feel helpless in the face of whether to graduate for a job or to pursue a higher degree.
（3）結構：what/why/how
要點：
(1) 先寫總趨勢：最低點、最高點、整體漲幅
(2) 對比：通過加減乘除，算出百分比的變化
參考文章
It is described by the chart that the aging problem has shown an irreversible trend in China. As we can see, the proportion that elders above 60 years old take in the whole population has risen up steadily by 0.4%-0.8% on averageevery year from 11.6% in 2007 to 13.7% in 2011, which has brought a heavy burden to our social security system.
Generally speaking, the aging society is the strongest proof of a country’s sound development. It is hardly difficult for us to figure out this positive sign in developed countries. However, what we should not ignore is the complicated situation in our motherland.
First, China is a vast economic and political entity with the huge population. If there are too many olds but relatively less youngsters, we don’t have enough labors available to keep our development sustainable.Second, China’s social security system, involving insurance mechanism, health care policy, etc., is still in a low-developed level, which can barely meet the needs of vast majority of seniors.
Thus, we still have a long hard trail to blaze. Considering that the aging problem is termed as a critical factor to social stability, we have all reasons to be serious about it. Also, our government should reform the security system immediately to build up a sense of justice and equality.
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