2019考研英語二大作文終極預測(教育文化類:網絡遊戲)

2019考研英語二大作文終極預測(教育文化類:網絡遊戲)

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should

interpret the chart, and

give your comments

You should write about 150 words.


2019考研英語二大作文終極預測(教育文化類:網絡遊戲)


預測範文

The column chart reveals market size of web game in China from the first quarter of 2010 to the second quarter of 2011. During the period of one and a half years,there has been a sudden jump from RMB 520 million to 820 million, a rise of 300 million, at the year-on-year growth rate of more than 50%.

When computer’s entertaining function is highly spoken of, such a problem does deserve our serious concern. First and foremost, the most serious harm ofInternet games come from their contents, which affect children’s mental fitness.The majority of games involve violence, such as fighting and killing. To win or kill their opponents, children are permitted to use all various means like guns, knives and bombs. When they are enjoying the pleasure of success, a violent turn of mind is developed and rooted in them, which may induce future violent behavior in their real life. What is more, being indulged in Internet games also does harm to children’s physical health. The radiation from the computer can arouse many uncomfortable feeling, like a headache, poor eyesight and even losing hair.Being lack of sleep and dinner, children are more inclined to get irritable and suffer from severe malnutrition.

Of course, it is not the end of the story. Being indulged in Internet games also affects children’s study, and their communication with others. All these facts indicate that it is time for us to manageInternet games by the whole society.

 參考譯文

上述柱狀圖揭示了2010年第一季度至2011年第二季度中國網頁遊戲市場規模。在此一年半之間,從5.2億元急劇上升到8.2億元,增長了3億元,同比增長率超出50%。

當大家都盛讚電腦的娛樂功能時,這個問題確實值得我們認真關注。首先,網絡遊戲最嚴重的危害來自於其內容,影響了孩子們的心理健康。大多數遊戲涉及暴力,例如打鬥和殺人。為了獲勝或殺死對手孩子們允許使用槍、刀、炸彈等各種手段。當他們享受過程的快樂之時,他們萌生了暴力思想並變得根深蒂固。此外,沉迷於網絡遊戲也會損害孩子們的生理健康。電腦輻射能夠引起很多不適反應,例如頭疼、視力下降甚至掉頭髮。孩子們廢寢忘食,更容易生氣並導致嚴重的營養不良。

當然,事情不止如此。沉迷於網絡遊戲也能影響孩子們的學習以及與他人的溝通能力。所有這些事實證明我們整個社會早就該控制網絡遊戲了。

 亮點詞彙

column chart柱狀圖 reveal描述 web game網頁遊戲 quarter季度 sudden急劇的 jump增長 million百萬 year-on-year同比 growth rate增長率 entertaining娛樂的 function功能 highly高度地 speak of讚揚 deserve值得 serious concern嚴肅關注 first and foremost首先 harm危害 Internet games網絡遊戲 content內容 affect影響 the majority of大多數 involve涉及 violence暴力 opponent對手permit允許 means方式 gun槍 bomb炸彈 pleasure快樂 violent暴力的 root紮根 induce引起behavior行為 what is more此外 do harm to危害 physical health生理健康 radiation輻射 arouse引起 uncomfortable不適的 feeling反應 headache頭疼 poor eyesight視力下降 be inclined to容易irritable暴怒的 suffer from遭受 severe嚴重的 malnutrition營養不良 of course當然 communication溝通 indicate證明 manage控制

道長點評

考研寫作結構第二個方面:評分標準,有三大評分標準:一是關聯詞,即過渡性詞語,一般小作文使用3-5個左右,大作文使用5-7個左右;二是同義替換,詞彙及句子結構最好進行同義替換,一個詞彙或句子結構最好不要反覆使用;三是代詞替換,可以使用代詞尤其是物稱代詞來替代名詞、短語或句子。

經典句型

1The majority of modern-day games are based on fantasy and they cannot teach us much about life.如今的遊戲有一大半都基於虛幻,從中人們無法體驗到太多的人生。2A good many middle school and high school boys spend numerous weekend hours glued to their computers, playing the latest fantasy games. 許多上中學的男孩一到週末就貼在電腦前,拼命玩最新潮的虛幻遊戲。3Many outstanding students flunked because he could not concentrate on the study for being too indulged in Internet games. 很多好學生太沉迷於網絡遊戲而無法專心學習,因而考試不及格。


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