p2: 描述一個能夠改善你居住的一個改變

今天我給大家分享一道p2(1-4)的新題:

describe a change that could improve your area

what it is

how it could improve

why it could improve

and explain how you would feel about the change

大家首先拿到這個題目的時候,首先會想到時態和這個改變的主體,就時態來說,不能使用一般現在時或者一般過去時,要使用would虛擬語氣,因為這個改變現在沒有實現,假設這個改變實現的話,那會是什麼樣子。

第二個需要思考的是我們應該選擇講什麼樣的改變,這個改變可以是實體,比如說建造鐵路,翻新建築物,建造橋樑或者公園;或者這個改變也可以是虛擬的,比如說服務,比如說改善當地的教育,提高當地的醫療服務。

但是我們在選擇維度的時候一定是要從最簡單的,最熟悉的維度去挑選素材,儘量用自己已經熟悉的素材進行嫁接,這個題目我們可以嘗試著用公園這個素材去回答。

Luckily in my area, there are a lot of facilities and amenities that I need to live comfortably, but I wish there was a park in my neighborhood.

Since I live in a big city, there aren’t many green spaces or areas with nature, I’ve always enjoyed feeling the grass under myfeet or relaxing under the cool shade of a tree, but unfortunately. At the moment, there's nothing like that in my neighborhood. In fact, the closest park is about 30 mins walk away, which is too far for me. I first noticed that my area could do with a park during the summer. The sun was really beating down and because of all the concrete apartment blocks, the heat was almost unbearable. I realized that if there had been a park, me and a lot of other residents would have gone there to cool down. Instead, most people went inside to a place with air conditioning so the streets were empty and quite unfriendly. Another reason a park would be a good idea is that there are lot of dog owners in my neighborhood too.

Since there isn’t a park, people take their dogs for walks on the pavement, which unfortunately means that the dog sometimes leave a mess on the sidewalk, and you have to be careful about keeping your shoes clean. Having a park in my neighborhood would solve both of those problems if we had a park, it would be full of happy residents, their pets and maybe their children as well. So I hope one day the local government will be able to provide that for the local residents in my area.

詞彙:

facilities and amenities:便利設施

the cool shade of a tree:蔭涼的樹蔭

my area could do with a park:我住的地方可以需要一個公園

beating down:曝曬

concrete apartment blocks:大家現在住的小區裡面的一棟一棟的房子

if there had been...... 要是當時....., 那麼早就..... 這句話可以翻譯成:如果當時我們住的地方有了公園,那麼當地人早就可以去那消暑了

leave a mess:留下垃圾

the local residents:當地居民


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