06.04 高考英語閱卷老師:最想給高分的作文開頭和結尾

一. 英語作文開頭四方式

1.“開門見山”式

一般來說,文章的開頭應儘量做到“開門見山”,即要用簡單明瞭的語言引出文章的話題,使人一開始就能瞭解文章要說明的內容。

① 對於敘事類的文章,可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

② 對於論述性的文章,可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點,接著展開進一步的論述。

如“The Time and the Money (時間和金錢)” 的開頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……

高考英語閱卷老師:最想給高分的作文開頭和結尾

2. 回憶性開頭

在描述事件或遊記類的文章中,採用回憶性的開頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。

這種類型的開頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞彙,如never forget(永遠無法忘記)、 remember (記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、 exciting(令人激動的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過的)……

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭還以這樣寫:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

高考英語閱卷老師:最想給高分的作文開頭和結尾

3. 疑問性開頭

在敘事類或論述性的文章中,都可採用疑問型開頭,這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(種樹)”的開頭可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出國之旅)”的開頭可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

4. 倒敘式開頭

在有的文章,特別是敘事類的文章中,可以採用倒敘的寫作手法,先寫出事件的結果,再陳述過程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開頭可以這樣寫:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It's a ... story.

高考英語閱卷老師:最想給高分的作文開頭和結尾

二. 英語作文結尾四方式

1. 自然結尾,點明主題

隨著文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。

如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.

再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2. 首尾呼應

昇華主題在文章的結尾可以用含義較深的話點明主題,深化主題,起到“畫龍點睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我愛家鄉)”的結尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

高考英語閱卷老師:最想給高分的作文開頭和結尾

3. 反問結尾,引起深思

這種方式的結尾雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強調作用,可引起他人的深思。

如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學英語能為我們帶來許多樂趣)” 的結尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can…Don't you think learning English is great fun?

4. 表達祝願,闡述願望

這種方式的結尾常出現在書信或演講稿的文體中,表示對他人的祝福或對將來的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農民們的一封信)”的結尾可以是:I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.

另外,書信的結尾常有以下形式的祝福語:Best wishes. I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year. I wish you have a good time等。

一、勤奮、意志與成功

1. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。

2. No pains, no gains.沒有付出就沒有收穫。

3. Constant dripping wears away a stone.水滴石穿,繩鋸木斷。

4. Care and diligence bring luck.謹慎和勤奮才能抓住機遇。

5. Genius is nothing but labor anddiligence.天才不過是勤奮而已。

6. Great hopes make great man.偉大的抱負造就偉大的人物。

7. Industry is the parent of success.勤奮是成功之母。

8. No rose without a thorn.沒有不帶刺的玫瑰。

9. There is no royal road to learning.書山有路勤為徑,學海無涯苦作舟。

10. No way is impossible to courage.勇者無懼。

11. Success belongs to the persevering.堅持就是勝利。

12. The finest diamond must be cut.玉不琢,不成器。

13. Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.逆境出人才。

二、學習方法與態度

14. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

15. It is never too old to learn.活到老,學到老。

16. Readingis to the mind while exercise to the body.讀書健腦,運動強身。

17. A man becomes learned by askingquestions.不恥下問才能有學問。

18. Learn and live.活著,為了學習。

19. Knowledge starts with practice.實踐出真知。

20. Books and friends should be few butgood.讀書如交友,應求少而精。

21. Complacency is the enemy of study.學習的敵人是自己的滿足。

22. Knowledge makes humble; ignorance makesproud.知識使人謙虛,無知使人傲慢。

23. Knowledge advances by steps and not byleaps.知識只能循序漸進,不能躍進。

24. A man can do no more than he can.凡事都應量力而行。

25. A man cannot spin and reel at the sametime.一心不能二用。

三、健康與心態

26. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一蘋果,不用請醫生。

27. Prevention is better than cure.預防勝於治療。

28. All work and no play makes Jack a dullboy.只工作,不玩耍,聰明小夥也變傻。

29. Health is not valued till sicknesscomes.病時方知健康可貴。

30. A close mouth catches no flies.病從口入。

31. A good medicine tastes bitter.良藥苦口。

32. Good health is over wealth.健康是最大的財富。

33. Happiness lies first of all in health.幸福首先在於健康。

34. Cheerfulness is health; its opposite,melancholy, is disease.歡樂就是健康,憂鬱就是病痛。

35. He is happy that thinks himself so.自樂者常樂。

36. Content is better than riches.知足者常樂。

四、品行與操守

37. Honesty is the best policy.誠實不欺為上策。

38. Respect yourself, or no one else willrespect you.要人尊敬,必須自重。

39. Patience is the best remedy.忍耐是良藥。

40. One good turn deserves another.行善積德。

41. He knows most who speaks least.大智若愚。

42. A still tongue makes a wise head.寡言者智。

43. A candle lights others and consumesitself.蠟燭照亮別人,卻毀滅了自己。

44. He is not fit to command others thatcannot command himself.正人須先正己。

45. Pride goes before, and shame comesafter.驕傲使人落後。

46. Please the eye and plague the heart.貪圖一時快活,必然留下隱禍。

47. Penny wise, pound foolish.貪小便宜吃大虧。

48. He who makes constant complaint getslittle compassion.經常訴苦,沒人同情。

49. Do as you would be done by.己所不欲,勿施於人。

五、金錢與財富

50. Gold will not buy anything.黃金不能買盡一切。

51. The chief aim of man is not to getmoney.人的主要目的並不是賺錢。

52. The money the miser hoards will do himno good.守財奴積財,對自己毫無好處。

53. What is wealth good for, if it bringsmelancholy?財富如帶憂鬱來,有了財富有何用?

54. Wealth makes worship.財富能使人拜倒。

六、珍惜時光

55. Time flies.光陰似箭。

56. Time and tide wait for no man.時不我待。

57. To save time is to lengthen life.節約時間就是延長生命。

58. Time stays not the fool’s leisure.時間不等閒逛的傻瓜。

59. Lost years are worse than lost dollars.失去時光金不換。

60. Time is money.時間就是金錢。

61. Time has wings.光陰去如飛。

62. Time lost cannot be won again.時光一去不復返。

七、擇友與友誼

63. Birds of a feather flock together.物以類聚,人以群分。

64. A man is known by his friends.什麼人交什麼朋友。

65. Keep good men company and you shall beof the number.近朱者赤,近墨者黑。

66. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情。

67. A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友難,失朋友易。

68. A faithful friend is hard to find.知音難覓。

69. A friend is never known till a man hasneed.需要之時方知友。

70. Misfortune tests the sincerity offriends.患難見真情。

八、常理與法則

71. A good beginning is half done.良好的開端是成功的一半。

72. Don’t put off till tomorrow what shouldbe done today.今日事,今日畢。

73. Fact speak louder than words.事實勝於雄辯。

74. Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。

75. A bird in the hand is worth than two inthe bush.一鳥在手勝過雙鳥在林。

76. Seeing is believing.眼見為實。

77. Still water run deep.靜水流深。

78. Strike the iron while it is hot.趁熱打鐵。

79. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.入鄉隨俗。

80. Man proposes, god disposes.謀事在人,成事在天。

81. Look before you leap.摸清情況再行動。

82. Experience must be bought.吃一塹,長一智。

83. Make hay while the sun shines.良機勿失。

84. He who does not advance loses ground.逆水行舟,不進則退。

85. Easier said than done.說得容易,做得難。

86. Every day is not Sunday.好景不常在。

87. All that glitters is not gold.閃光的不一定都是金子。

88. All things are difficult before theyare easy.凡事總是由難而易。

89. Every advantage has its disadvantage.有利必有弊。

90. Every man has his faults.金無足赤,人無完人。

91. Four eyes see more than two.集思廣益。

92. He laughs best who laughs last.誰笑到最後,誰笑得最好。

93. It is the first step that coststroublesome.萬事開頭難。

94. The farthest way about is the nearestway home.抄近路反而繞遠路。

95. Take things as they come.既來之,則安之。

96. Every man is the architect of his ownfortune.自己的命運自己掌握。

97. The early bird catches the worm.早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。

98. It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水難收。

99. Don’t trouble trouble until troubletroubles you.不要自找麻煩。

100. Don’t try to teach your grandmother tosuck eggs.不要班門弄斧。

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