一、在中方最困難的時候，國際社會許多成員給予中方真誠幫助和支持，我們會始終銘記並珍惜這份友誼。
直譯： When China is in its dire need ,many members of the international community gave china assistance and support ,and we will consistently remember and cherish such friendship .
分析：可以換主語，三個小短句，主語分別是中國，國際社會，中國。我們可以用中國做主語。那謂語就變成了接到。最後一個句子，這份友誼是需要強調的部分，可以做主語，用被動。
改正: At the most difficult moment （in our fight against the outbreak）, China received assistance and help from a lot of members of the global community . Such expression of friendship will always be remembered and cherished by the Chinese people .
積累：
1.在最困難時候 at the most difficult moment .
2.幫助和支持 assistance and help
3.這份友誼 such expression of friendship
二、當前，國際社會最需要的是堅定信心，齊心協力，團結應對，全面加強國際合作，凝聚起戰勝疫情強大合力，攜手贏得這場人類同重大傳染性疾病的鬥爭。
直譯：Now , the international community needs to strengthen confidence ,work together in responding the infectious disease . We should enhance global cooperation and gather the cohesive force so that we can win the battle against the infectious disease .
改正：At such a moment ,it is imperative for the international community to strengthen confidence ,act with unity and work together in a collective response, We must comprehensively step up international cooperation and foster greater synergy so that humanity as one could win the battle against such a major infectious disease .
積累：
1.當前： at such a moment（強調）
2.需要/必須 ：it is imperative for sb to do sth
3.齊心協力,團結應對：act with unity and work together in a collective response .
4.全面：comprehensively
5.加強：enhance/strengthen/step up
6.凝聚合力：foster great synergy
7.重大：such a major （強調）
8.人類（整體）：humanity as one
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