一、在中方最困难的时候，国际社会许多成员给予中方真诚帮助和支持，我们会始终铭记并珍惜这份友谊。
直译： When China is in its dire need ,many members of the international community gave china assistance and support ,and we will consistently remember and cherish such friendship .
分析：可以换主语，三个小短句，主语分别是中国，国际社会，中国。我们可以用中国做主语。那谓语就变成了接到。最后一个句子，这份友谊是需要强调的部分，可以做主语，用被动。
改正: At the most difficult moment （in our fight against the outbreak）, China received assistance and help from a lot of members of the global community . Such expression of friendship will always be remembered and cherished by the Chinese people .
积累：
1.在最困难时候 at the most difficult moment .
2.帮助和支持 assistance and help
3.这份友谊 such expression of friendship
二、当前，国际社会最需要的是坚定信心，齐心协力，团结应对，全面加强国际合作，凝聚起战胜疫情强大合力，携手赢得这场人类同重大传染性疾病的斗争。
直译：Now , the international community needs to strengthen confidence ,work together in responding the infectious disease . We should enhance global cooperation and gather the cohesive force so that we can win the battle against the infectious disease .
改正：At such a moment ,it is imperative for the international community to strengthen confidence ,act with unity and work together in a collective response, We must comprehensively step up international cooperation and foster greater synergy so that humanity as one could win the battle against such a major infectious disease .
积累：
1.当前： at such a moment（强调）
2.需要/必须 ：it is imperative for sb to do sth
3.齐心协力,团结应对：act with unity and work together in a collective response .
4.全面：comprehensively
5.加强：enhance/strengthen/step up
6.凝聚合力：foster great synergy
7.重大：such a major （强调）
8.人类（整体）：humanity as one
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