【CET-6命題作文】Fight against Piracy
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Fight against Privacy. Your composition should be at least 160 words.
【範文】
Fight against Piracy
Nowadays, the problem of piracy has become more and more serious. Books, tapes, DVDs and other high-tech products almost all have been pirated. When a new product comes into market, very probably, its pirated counterpart① will soon make its appearance in the market, too.
Piracy has caused a great loss to the legitimate② producers, inventors and writers, and made great confusion in the markets. Because the pirated products often cost much less than the genuine③ ones, they enjoy pretty good selling in spite of their relatively poor quality. The genuine products, on the contrary, sell poorly. This happens especially to some high-tech products, whose prices are often a little high. In addition, in the case of the pirated books, sometimes, they do great harm to the authors' names due to some misprinting④. However, piracy doesn't benefit those customers who buy the pirated products, because in the long run, customers will suffer a big loss for the sake of small gains. Shouldn't we solve the problem now?
In my opinion, this problem of piracy should receive due attention now, and it's time everyone started the battle against piracy. First, customers should develop their consciousness⑤ to resist the pirated products. Besides, government should take effective measures to stop piracy. Finally related laws must be strictly executed⑥ to completely ban⑦ piracy. Only in this way can we wipe out piracy.
【註釋】
①counterpart: 副本, 極相似的人或物
②legitimate: 合法的
③genuine: 真正的
④misprinting: 印刷錯誤
⑤consciousness: 意識
⑥execute: 執行
⑦ban: 禁止
【簡評】
這是一篇根據命題完成的議論文。
文章開篇破題，一筆到位，指出盜版現象日益嚴重，並舉例加以證明。第二段，作者首先從多個角度列舉了盜版造成的嚴重後果，段尾用Shouldn't we solve the problem now?既承上啟下，又引發讀者關注。第三段用列舉法說明我們應當採取措施，與盜版做鬥爭。
本文按照提出問題、分析問題、解決問題的順序完成全文，層層推進，有條不紊。連接詞in addition, first, besides, finally的靈活使用，增加了文章的連貫性。文末倒裝句的使用，簡明有力，成為全文的點睛之筆。
資料來源：新大學英語四、六級考點透視叢書：六級寫作/李華田主編，武漢大學出版社，2006
