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初中英语书面表达之高分秘诀
一、动笔之前，认真审题。
《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，
看到考题后，勿急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。
二、围绕中心，拟定提纲 （书面表达评分原则有五条）：
☆ 1.内容要点；
2.运用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
3.上下文的连贯性。
4.书写规范性
5.字数达到要求大多为 100 词左右。
三、语言通顺，表达准确
☆ 1. 避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉或已背过的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以
避免重复和呆板。
2. 注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
☆ (1) 时态要准确无误。（根据书面表达要求而定，多为一般现在时，一般过去时或一般将
来时）
☆ (2) 特别注意单数可数名词的使用。如 My hobby is reading book.(误)
☆ (3) 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的 an 不能写成 a。
☆ (4) 动名词做主语。（很多同学喜欢用动作做主语，切记必须用动名词或动词不定式。）
(5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如 believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant 等。
(6) 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
(7) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。尤其是动词和介词之后。
四、上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则。
主要是学会过渡词，大部分为连词的正确使用。
同学们应注意下面过渡词的用法：
1) 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or …
2) 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however …
☆3) 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally,(特别是在列举理由或原因
或提出建议时还可以用 besides, What's more) after, before, after a few days, at last, in the
past, when, while, then, after that …
4) 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the one hand, on the other hand, even
though …
5) 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, in order to, …
6) 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as …
7) 表示总结性的过渡词：in brief, in a word, in general, in all, all in all, generally speaking …
五、不会表达，另辟蹊径。
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，多数不以文采打分。建议多用简单句（第六
条讲满分作文的要求），复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话："错误面前人人平
等，文采好不加分"。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，或出现想用的单词出现遗忘
时，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表
达习惯。在阅卷中大部分阅卷老师，一看要点。二看语法错误。
六、锦上添花，量力而行。
如果你的目标为满分或接近满分，你还有时间和精力，那么，请注意以下几点：
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(1) 句型多样化，不要 I（We）……到底，使人觉得乏味。
(2) 适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。
(3) 进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。
(4) 适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。
(5) 偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。
(6) 适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。
☆七、书写工整，卷面整洁。
字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。卷面
潦草者一般会被降档处理，也就是说扣 2-3 分。 （教师在阅卷时，同一份作文，有时会出
现差距 8-10 分的现象，大都因为书写原因。试想一下，炎热的夏天，50 位教师在同一个机
房，面对散热的电脑，每天阅卷任务 300-500 份，面对潦草的试卷，部分教师极有可能会认
为你不尊重英语，不尊重英语教师，这种状态下，很难取得高分。）
☆八、写完之后，勿忘检查。
中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不
可少。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
书面表达检查五要求
(1) 要点是否有遗漏
(2) 语法是否有误。尤其单数可数名词使用及动名词作主语是否有错。
(3) 拼写有无错误。
(4) 人称是否用错。
(5) 认真抄写到答题纸,书写规范,卷面整洁。首行缩进四个字母距离,句首词大写,句末实心点。
书面表达应该遵循的"五步走"的写作思路。即：审—列---连---美---查。
◆审：认真审题，抓住要点
◆列：段落分明，列好提纲(列词组)
◆连: 连词成句，连句成篇
◆美: 斟词酌句，修改打磨
◆查: 通读文章，查找错误。
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英语书面表达 要注意结构（beginning 开头, body 主体, ending 结尾），精彩的结尾，犹
如点睛之笔，会让你的作文大放异彩。以下给大家提供一些精彩的结尾。
☆书面表达精彩结尾
Useful and beautiful sentences(必须记住)
1. All in all, I'm ready to help people who need help.
2. If everyone does something, our world will become more and more beautiful.
3. I think healthy food and different relaxing activities will help us live healthily and happily.
4. It really makes me relaxed and more energetic to concentrate on my work.
5. However, each coin has two sides.
6. We can give away some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside world.
7. Not only do I feel good about helping others, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.
8. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
9. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
10. The more we do, the better our world will be!
英语书面表达如果能适当使用谚语，也会给阅卷老师流下深刻的印象，阅卷老师会从心里
认定你是一名出色的学生，你是一位英语水平较高的学生，从而给出很高的分数，甚至满
分。
☆英语作文常用谚语、俗语
1. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
2. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
3. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，不用请医生。
4. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。
5. Each coin has two sides. 事情都有两面。
6. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
7. Health is better than wealth. 健康胜过财富。
8. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量
9. No pain, no gain.不劳无获。
10. Where there's a will, there's a way. 有志者事竟成。
11. Practice makes perfect ．熟能生巧。
12.A miss is as good as a mile．失之毫厘，差之千里。
☆书面表达我们会需要用到一些常用句型 ，如提出建议，表达决心，谈论梦想，爱好等。
下面给大列举一下常用句型：
表达提出建议的句型：
1. should +v 原型
2. can + v 原型
3. be supposed to do
4. be expected to do `
5. It's best to do
6. It's important to do
7. You'd better do
8. It's a good idea to do
9. advise sb to do
10. I suggest that we should do
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表达个人观点的句型
1. I think/believe (that)…我认为……。
2. In my opinion, …在我看来……。
3. As I see it.…在我看来……。
4. From my point of view，… 在我看来……。
5. As far as I am concerned,…就我看来……。
表达决定、决心的句型
1. I decide to do
2. I have made up my mind to do
3. I've make a decision to do
4. I've fixed on doing sth. 【fix on: 决定；确定】
5. I will /am going to do
6. I plan to do
7. I intend to do
表示过去与现在的对比的句型
1. I had to work on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes in the past. However,
things have changed a lot now. I have more free time.
2. I used to have to work even on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes. Now I
have more free time.
3. In the past, I had to work on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes. But now
I have more free time.
4. It's quite different now. I used to have to work even on weekends doing endless homework and
attending classes, but now I have more free time.
5. It's not like it used to be at all. Now I have more free time.
6. I have more free time than before.
表达爱好的句型
1. I like / love enjoy playing the guitar best.
2. I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps In my spare time,.
3. I'm interested in collecting stamps.
4. I'm really fond of skating in winter.
5. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
6. I like nothing better than swimming.
7. I'm crazy about sports.
8. I lose myself in collecting stamps.
谈论梦想的句型
1. I'm going to be / become a teacher.
2. My dream is to be a teacher.
3. I dream of becoming a teacher.
4. My goal is to become a teacher.
5. I want to be / become a teacher in the future.
6. I would like to be a teacher in the future.
7. I wish to be / become a teacher in the future.
8. I hope I will become a teacher in the future.
9. I've made up my mind to become a teacher in the future.
10. I'm determined to become a teacher in the future.
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表示"采取措施"的句型
1. Something must be done to tackle the problem.
2. It's time to take steps to control the serious pollution.
3. We must take action now to control pollution.
4. We have to take effective measures to solve this problem.
5. We should adopt some measures to fight against pollution.
中考真题之书面表达：
一．当前，学生的学校生活多姿多彩，业余爱好也丰富多样。下图是我们对某所中学 300
名学生业余爱好的调查结果。请根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文。
Music 48% Others2% Reading20% Sports 25% collections 5%
要求：1.必须包括：①调查结果②你自己的爱好、选择的原因及带来的益处。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名或人名。
3.词数 80~100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Many students have hobbies. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually
do in their free time.
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书面表达
One possible version
Many students have hobbies. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually
do in their free time. Nearly half of the students like music, and a quarter of them usually spend
their time playing sports on weekends, twenty percent enjoy reading books. A few students like
collecting things they like, such as stamps, coins and so on. Few students have other hobbies.
As for me, I prefer listening to music. Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy
and make me relaxed after hard study. Sometimes I listen to English songs. I can learn English
words or phrases from them. It really improves my English a lot.
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二．假设你喜欢的老师是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.请根据下面的提示，以My favorite teacher
为题目，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 必须包括①description ②friendship ③the best quality 三个方面的内容，括号
内的提示可以任意选择或可以适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名或学校。
3．字数（80-100）（文章题目和开头已经给出，不计入总次数）
favorite teacher: ①description (appearance, character…)
②friendship (an event between you; the story of becoming friends)
③the best quality （kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful…）
My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is
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三．同学们，三年的初中生活就要结束了，在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请
用英文写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼；
2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程；
3.你的感想。
要求：1.字数:80-100 字。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have
happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was
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书面表达一
如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。下图是我们对某所中学 300 名同学减压放松的方
法的调查结果。请根据以下要求，写一篇短文。
Music 47% Others2% Reading25% Sports 20% Traveling 6%
内容必须包括：①调查结果 ②你的压力 ③你减压放松的方式，选择的原因或带来的益处。
要求：（1）词数：80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）必须包括所有要点，不能逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Nowadays many students are under too much pressure, but they have their own ways to relax
themselves. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do to get relaxed.
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书面表达二
轻松愉快的心情有利于学习和生活。在紧张忙碌的学习之余，你怎样做什么？是做运动、
听音乐、做志愿者、旅游、看电影、还是„„？为什么？请以"How I spend my free time?"
为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. 三种你的休闲时间的活动。 2. 各陈述至少一个理由。
要求：（1）词数：80-100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。（2）必须包括所有要点，可适当发
挥；（3）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
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书面表达三
紧张的中考结束后，同学们将迎来轻松愉快的暑假。你的暑假计划是什么呢？你的朋友
的暑假计划是什么呢？ 为什么？请根据要求写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：1. 你和你的朋友的暑假计划； 2.你和你朋友制定暑假计划的理由。
要求：1. 词数：80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
The summer vacation is coming. My friend
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书面表达四
近来，《朗读者》和《中国诗词大会》等电视节目播出后，在全国掀起了全民阅读的风
暴，著名作家 Francis Bacon 曾说过："Reading makes a full man."可见，阅读使人聪明，阅读
使人充实，阅读对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用。你平时都读什么书呢？请你结合
自己的观点，以"Reading Makes a Full Man"为题，写一篇短文，表达你对阅读的看法和自己
未来的阅读计划。
内容包括：1.你平时读的书籍； 2. 你对阅读的看法； 3. 你未来的阅读计划。
要求：（1）词数：80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（2）必须包括所有要点；
（3）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. We can
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Reading makes a full man! Let's start reading now.
优质范文展示：
书面表达一：
One possible version1:
Nowadays many students are under too much pressure, but they have their own ways to relax
themselves. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do to get relaxed.
Nearly half of the students enjoy listening to music to relax themselves, and a quarter of them
usually lower their pressure by reading books. Twenty percent of the students get relaxed by
playing sports. A few students like traveling to make themselves relaxed. Few students have other
ways to relax.
My pressure is from my parents. They expect me to study all the time so that I can get into a
high school and later a good university. They push me so hard. But I have my own way to get
relaxed. I prefer listening to music. Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy. I can learn
English words or phrases from them. It really improves my English a lot.
One possible version2:
Nowadays many students are under too much pressure, but they have their own ways to relax
themselves. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do to get relaxed.
Nearly half of the students enjoy listening to music to relax themselves, and a quarter of them
usually lower their pressure by reading books. Twenty percent of the students get relaxed by
playing sports. A few students like traveling to make themselves relaxed. Few students have other
ways to relax.
My pressure is from my parents. They expect me to study all the time so that I can get into a
high school and later a good university. They push me so hard. But I have my own way to get
relaxed. I think the best way to relax is through traveling. Because it is healthy for the mind and
the body. What's more, it can open up my eyes to the outside world.
书面表达二：
How I spend my free time？
In my free time, I often watch English movies because it can make me feel easy and happy.
Besides, I can also improve my pronunciation, listening and grammar.
Another way to spend my free time is doing some volunteering. I love animals so I often
volunteer at an animal hospital on weekends. I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see
the animals get better, and I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
I like to travel with families in my free time, too. Traveling can make me relaxed and
energetic to concentrate on my study. What's more, and it can open up my eyes to the outside
world.
In a word, I am willing to do something meaningful in my free time.
书面表达三：
One possible version:
The summer vacation is coming. My friend Tony and I have our summer plans.
I plan to visit Shanghai with my family. Because it's one of the liveliest cities in China. I
want to open up my eyes. And I'm also going to learn to dance during the vacation. Because I like
dancing and it can keep healthy and make me relaxed.
My friend Tony would like to volunteer in an animal hospital. Because he loves animals and
wants to be a doctor in the future. He can get some experience from volunteering. What's more, he
can do what he loves to do and help others at the same time.
(103 words)
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书面表达四：
One possible version:
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only
open our minds but also make us wiser and richer in life. Besides, reading is also one of the most
important ways to learn a foreign language like English.
I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what's
going on around the world. I also read story books and novels which make me relaxed and happy
in my free time.
Summer vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and
more English books to improve my language skills. I'm sure reading can make a difference to my
life.
Reading makes a full man! Let's start reading now. (112 words)
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