中考作文題型訓練:介紹、評價、分析

中考作文題型訓練:介紹、評價、分析

前言:廣東省英語中考的作文題與信息歸納題的短文息息相關,在審題的時候準確定義寫作對象和寫作內容是書面表達拿高分的關鍵。此外,考場作文遵循一定的套路,寫出完美的框架和使用一些高級的句式可以讓文章獲得更高檔次的分值。

假如你是上文"共享小圖"海報中的Bryan Lin,經過三個月的運營之後,請你寫封電子郵件給Todd Bol,談談你對"共享小圖"的感受,內容包括:

1 簡單介紹你的身份,並說明寫信意圖;

2 這種圖書館的好處(兩點);

3 "共享小圖"存在的問題及其原因,並詢問建議。

<strong>題目分析:

<strong>寫作對象:Todd Bol,共享小圖的創始人;

<strong>寫作內容:介紹個人信息,評價共享小圖,分析共享小圖的問題與原因,詢問建議。

<strong>對評價共享小圖的提示:共享小圖是一個社區項目,它的好處可以從改善鄰里關係和改善人們的生活方式這兩方面來考慮。

參考範文:(請重點記憶下劃線的句子)

Dear Todd,

I hope this email finds you well. I am Bryan Lin, the director of the Little Free Library in Sunshine Park Community. I am writing to tell you my opinions about this project.

In my opinion, this Little Free Library has two advantages. First, it can help our neighbors form closer friendships with each other by exchanging(交換) books. Second, it can help more people get into the habit of reading books.

However, as time goes by, the books in the library get fewer and fewer because some people just take books but don't leave books. I wonder if you can give me some advice to deal with this problem.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Bryan Lim


中考作文題型訓練:介紹、評價、分析

同類型話題寫作練習:社區話題,評價,分析

話題:時間銀行:Time Bank

幾年前,"時間銀行"還是一個新鮮事物,如今,它在很多地方備受歡迎。假設你的社區也將嘗試推行這一個項目,請你就此寫一篇短文談談你的看法,內容包括:

1 你所在的地方有開展"時間銀行"嗎?

2 你覺得這個項目有什麼好處?(兩點)

3 你是否願意加入這個項目。若願意,請你談談你的技能及需要;若不願意,談談你的理由。

<strong>題目分析:

<strong>寫作對象:本文屬於個人分享觀點,無特定閱讀對象;

<strong>寫作內容:有沒有時間銀行?評價時間銀行,是否願意加入時間銀行及理由。

<strong>對評價時間銀行的提示:時間銀行是一個社區項目,它的好處可以從改善鄰里關係和改善人們的生活方式這兩方面來考慮。

參考範文:(請重點記憶下劃線的句子)

Time Bank was invented in 1980 by an American professor of Law. We haven't carried out(開展、實施) Time Bank in our community yet.

In my opinion, this project has two advantages. First, it can encourage our neighbors to do more volunteer work in their free time. Second, it can help our neighbors form closer friendships by helping each other.

Since(既然) Time Bank is such a great project, I would like to join it very much. I am good at English and I can take care of pets. In exchange(交換), I hope someone can help me with my math homework and repair my bike.

I am looking forward to having this project in my community.


中考作文題型訓練:介紹、評價、分析

同類型作文拓展練習:假設你是一個參與者,評價、分析

1)無人零售店:the self-service retail station

假如你是上文"無人零售店"中的使用者Ms Xia,經過三個月的使用後,請你寫封郵件給無人零售店的運營者,談談你對無人零售店使用的感受,內容包括:

1 簡單介紹你的身份,並說明寫信意圖;

2 這種無人零售店的好處(兩到三點);

3 無人零售店存在的問題及其原因,並詢問建議。

Dear Sir,

I hope this email finds you well. I am Mrs Xia. I work in an office in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province. I often buy snacks and drinks from your self-service retail stations. Now I am writing to tell you my opinions about this kind of stations.

In my opinion, the self-service retail station has three advantages. First, it saves our time because we can get food without leaving the floor. Second, it saves our money because the prices of food in the stations are lower than those in most other stores. Third, it provides us more chances to know more people while buying food.

However, although I don't want to believe, some people steal(偷) food and drinks from the station because nobody else is there to stop them. I wonder if you can give me some advice to deal with this problem.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Ms Xia


中考作文題型訓練:介紹、評價、分析

2 NBA球星勒布朗.詹姆斯在2018年創辦了I Promise School(IPS), 致力於幫助問題少年重返校園和健康成長。

假設你是上文中的Sammy Turner, 即將完成在IPS的初中學業。請你給LeBron James寫一封郵件,談談你在該校讀書的感想,內容包括:

1 表達對LeBron的感激之情和原因;

2 你在IPS讀書的收穫(三點);

3 你打算將來如何傳播這種愛心。

Dear Mr. James,

I am Sammy Turner, a student at IPS. I want to say "thank you" to you. Because of you and IPS, I had the chance to go back to school and I have become a better person.

Since I studied at IPS, I have learned a lot. First, I have learned a lot of knowledge and make progress in study. Second, I always feel loved and important here and I have learned to help others. Third, with the help of IPS, I can face my problems bravely and deal with them in the right way.

In the future, I will never forget that I am a member of IPS. I will try my best to help more people in need. I wish the world could be a place full of love.

Best regards,

Sammy Turner


中考作文題型訓練:介紹、評價、分析


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