不会写句子,一肚子话表达不出?句子这样写作文

我们在写作文的时候有两种问题出现:第一是无话可说;第二是一肚子话表达不出来。前面的文章中我们介绍过了无话可说如何操作,今天就告诉大家如何写出满意的句子。

我们来看这篇文章:

假设你是李红,你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排,请根据以下要点,写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。

1. 学开车

2. 参加英语培训课程

3. 去北京看奥运会

4. 游览北京的名胜

注意:

1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。


首先,我们对题目信息点进行分析。这些信息点有:1. 我是李红;2. 美国笔友Robert; 3. E-mail; 4. 学开车;5. 参加英语培训;6. 看奥运会;7. 游览名胜古迹。

其次,翻译信息点,添加细节。句子翻译的过程中,一定要抓住句子成分:主谓宾,主系表。


这里中翻英三步走:

1,找句子主干,即主谓宾,主系表。

2,加修饰词及状语(地点,时间,方式,原因)。

3,整理句子时态和语态。

比如:

1. 我是李红。 I am Lihong. 主系表结构。

2.我将在暑假学开车。I learn how to drive.

加上时间地点:I learn how to drive this summer holiday in my hometown.

修改时态和语态:I will learn how to drive this summer holiday in my hometown.


Dear Robert:

  How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.

  That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?

Best wishes!

中翻英三步走,希望能帮助大家进行句子的准确翻译。如果句子中再加入定语从句等高级句型就更好了!


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