写作思路:
第一步,先尝试概括性描述。
第二步,在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。
关于风的描写
用风衬托恶劣环境的时候,形容风的词常有no wind(无风);strong(强烈)。
翻译练习1:这个冬季,天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风。
第一步,先尝试概括性描述。
参考答案:
This winter, the weather is unusually cold.There is no wind at this moment.
第二步,在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。
翻译练习2:
这个冬季,天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风,世界好像停止有这一刻,河流也停下了脚步。
参考答案:
This winter, the weather is unusually cold.There is no wind at this moment,
the world seems to have stopped at this moment, the river has stopped its footsteps.
翻译练习3:
1)外面刮起了大风,地上的灰尘乱飞。(概括描写)
2)外面刮起了大风,吹的树枝乱摆,地上的灰尘乱飞,让人睁不开眼睛。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)Outside, there was a strong wind, the dust on the ground was flying in disorder。
2)Outside, there was a strong wind, and the branches were blowing in disorder. The dust on the ground was flying in disorder, which made people unable to open their eyes.
关于雨的描写
用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候,常用的词有:
rain cats and dogs 下倾盆大雨
heavy rain 大雨
a heavy downpour 大暴雨
be caught in the rain 被雨淋
翻译练习1:
1)昨天下了倾盆大雨。(概括描写)
2)昨天放学的时候在下着倾盆大雨。我到家时全身都湿了。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)It was raining cats and dogs.
2)It was raining cats and dogs yesterday when school was over. I was all wet when I got home.
翻译练习2:
1)下了大暴雨。(概括描写)
2)真不幸,汤姆在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1) There was a heavy downpour.
2) Unfortunately, Tom was caught in the heavy rain.
翻译练习3:
1)刚才还是白云朵朵,一霎时狂风暴雨起来了。(概括描写)
2)夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。刚才还是白云朵朵,一霎时就电闪雷鸣,狂风暴雨起来了。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)There were still white clouds. In a flash,the storm began to rain.
2)The weather in summer is unpredictable. Just now, there were still white clouds. In a flash, lightning and thunder broke out, and the storm began to rain.
关于天气炎热的描写
用天热衬托恶劣环境的时候,常用的词有:
hot(热);melt(融化);sweat like a pig(汗流浃背);
rain fire(天气火热);terrible(热得吓人)
翻译练习1:
1)天气闷热得要命。(概括描写)
2)天气闷热得要命,一丝风也没有,稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)The weather was so hot .
2)The weather was so hot that there was no wind, and the thick air seemed to be frozen.
翻译练习2:
1)热得足以把地狱熔化了。(概括描写)
2)现在热得足以把地狱熔化了,我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)It's hot enough to melt hell.
2)It's hot enough to melt hell. I can hardly breathe.
I hope it will be cooler soon。
翻译练习3:
1)天气热得吓人,我汗流浃背。(概括描写)
2)虽然我什么都没做,但还是汗流浃背。不止是热,是像非洲一样热!天热得吓人。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)This wather is terrible, I am sweating like a pig.
2)I am sweating like a pig, and I'm not doing anything. It's not just hot, It's Africa hot! This wather is terrible.
描写寒冷的句子
常用词有cold;bone-chilling.
翻译练习1:
1)天很冷。(概括描写)
2)我冷得不停打哆嗦。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)It’s cold.
2)I can’t stop shivering from the cold.
翻译练习2:
1)这寒风真是刺骨.(概括描写)
2)这寒风如此刺骨,直接穿过我的身体。(细节描写)
参考答案:
1)The wind was bone-chilling.
2)The wind was so bone-chilling that cut right through me.
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