Why do you choose to attend the national post-graduate entrance examination(研究生入學考試)?
回答問題一定要有邏輯！有邏輯！有邏輯！ 重要的事情說三遍。作為研究生，科研能力是非常重要的，要知道一個沒有邏輯的人是很難做好科研的，千萬不要給導師留下這樣的印象。一般都是採用總--分--總結構。大家體會一下：
（先總說）There are several reasons. (先說一句總結句)
（第一點）The first reason is, I have been deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere when I came here last summer. In my opinion, as one of the most famous university in our country, it provide people with enough room to get further enrichment. （誇誇一下你要考的大學，這個應該不難吧！）
（第二點）The second one is I am longing for doing researchin +專業領域 throughout my life. Its a pleasure to to be with my favourite subject for a lifetime. I suppose this is the most important factor in my decision.（我想做科研，這是我興趣所在，做這件事情，我很幸福，很滿足！）
Thirdly, I learnt a lot from my job during the past two years. However, I think further study in still urgent for me to realize self-value. Life is precious. It is necessory to seize any chance for self-development, especially in this competitive modern world.（從過去的工作經驗中，得出結論自己需要進一步提升自己）
（最後總結）In a word, I am looking forward to making a solid foundation for further profession after two years study here.
這上面用得好的詞語和結構有：
- be deeply impressed 被深深感染了，對...留下了深刻的印象
- as one of the most famous university, 作為最好的大學之一，
- get further enrichment 進一步提升
- I am longing for ...我一直渴望。。。
- It's a pleasure to be... 做。。。工作是一件讓人高興的事情
- I suppose， 我認為
- ...is still urgent for me ...對我來說仍然是非常緊急的事情。
- realize self-value實現個人價值
- in this competitive modern world 如今競爭如此激烈
- in a word , 總而言之
- make a solid foundation 打下堅實的基礎
靈活掌握這些結構，學會運用，你就可以自己組織語言了！ 小夥伴們加油！
因為疫情，複試延期了，預調劑被叫停了，但是該來的終會來的，不要因為這段時間自己浮躁不安，猶豫不決，丟掉了最後到來的寶貴機會。
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