口语绝对称得上雅思考试中的一大魔咒，很多烤鸭就算拼尽全力依旧难逃5分厄运。来自西南地区某重点高校的L同学也曾是这样一位学生。不过经过短短90天，他就完成了5-5-7的分数逆袭。今天，就来跟您分享他的“逆战”故事...
# L同学的5-5-7之旅 #
- L同学 -
第一次备考心情日记：
没准备+紧张=“试水”变“划水”
第二次备考心情日记：
题目全刷完，一顿操作猛如虎，一看成绩还是5，一场考试一套SKII，你就问我“吐没吐”..
第三次备考心情日记：
每一个5分都不无辜，每一个7分也都不无缘无故。
- 大Ray老师诊断 -
L同学在雅思口语考试中主要涵盖以下问题：
1）自以为不够努力，其实根本原因是中西方思维导致逻辑不清，让考官听完答案云里雾里。
2）缺少口语考场状态模拟导致临时反应能力低
3）语音语调、语法错误、词汇单一导致整体无亮点、无特色等于大量失分
而大Ray老师又是如何针对以上三个问题进行调整的呢？我们以L同学其中练习的一个Part 2话题为例，看看他这90天究竟经历了些什么吧..
PART2 话题
Describe a time when you were excited
You should say :
Where you were
When it was
Who you were with
And explain why you were excited.
此类话题是考生在雅思口语当中常考的一类话题，很多同学一看到这类话题脑子里首先就蹦出来了无数思路及脑洞，但其实往往此类话题难点也在于此。
由于此类话题文章范围较大，同学们被要求瞬间思考人生“高光时刻”还要理清思路。所以在答题上不但容易撞内容，还易将很excited的事情形容的没有那么excited（越大越常见的高光时刻其实有时越难形容）。因此，在雅思口语考试当中如何能在短时间内根据话题整理已有素材，快速筛选对于考生尤其考究。
而大多数考生和L同学一样，在平时练习时由于不能完全模拟考场状态，所想到的例子以及词汇由于缺少老师指导，都很容易陷入5分盲区。
L同学在未经大Ray老师
指导时的备考作答
By talking about this topic, I want to share a travel experience in Iceland. I went to Iceland 5 years ago with my parents. We took flight to there and we visit a lot of places, such as Black beach. We take a lot of photos there, and I bought a post cards. Iceland is a very beautiful country, the sea is crystal clear and the sky is clean. I remember I meet a local people who taught us how to say hello in Iceland language. I also have seen the aurora, which is very amazing. I was really excited about the aurora, it is the first time I saw aurora.
It was an excited trip!
L同学在经大Ray老师指导
90天后的口语作业作答
Well, I'm a travel devoteewho have been to more than 20 countries. But, the one which really impressed me was Iceland. I had been to that stunning country about five years ago. My parents and I went out on a 5-day trip. We had a lot of great time there, but the last day was definitely the highlight, that day was extremely exciting.
By the day, we were told that there were going to have an aurora burst that night. You know how excited we were there! And our traveling agency just arranged a mini bus immediately, and then we justhit the road to catch the aurora. Our driver was very experienced, said he knew where exactly the aurora was. So, our little bus just kept heading in the dark, and I couldn't help myself from gazing at the sky through the coach windows. Suddenly,a piece of jade just popped out. It was aurora! Well, I was speechless and so did my parents. After that, the bus driver shared their local myths behind aurora, which were really fun and mysterious.
As for my feeling, the day I saw aurora would definitely last my memory for long. Also, I really thank that driver who helped me to see the aurora with my own eyes.If he wasn’t so experienced, I wouldn’t see aurora.
So yea, it was a great trip!
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很多同学看到这儿都会发问，这不就是“话”变多了吗，难道5分与7分的区别就是这个？那你可就想错了，真正的得分点在这里..
1）表达是否更自信，语音语调方面调整：
由于此篇文章并没有放L同学的音频原件，所以在语言是否流畅和语音语调上我们不做太多深究，但值得考生注意的是对于雅思口语考试，其实也有特别针对雅思考场喜爱的流畅度和语音语调考察，很多同学由于紧张、思辨能力不足很难将语言组织完美，出现卡壳、断句奇怪等问题都容易造成考场失分。
2）加强反应能力，话题逻辑亮点连续输出： 另外，我们再针对以上口语作业进行点评。从L同学的入学前后作业对比我们可以看出，除论点分散，连贯性不佳外，最最强调的“excited”点始终在文章中表现的平铺直序，不够精彩。
尤其在最后“标黄”部分经突然收尾，更是让人意犹未尽。而在同样part2话题部分，L同学就给足了考官惊喜。内容不但按叙事逻辑走，清晰！并且由于大Ray老师本身拥有多年英国留学经验，对中西方思维文化了解颇深，在语法精度、广度，词汇运用上都帮助L同学完成了高规格突破。
3）建立完善语法系统，杜绝低级错误：
广度方面：从句式单一且缺乏复杂句，唯一用的一句定语从句的修饰还是错误的。到尽管有几处细小的错误，但变化多样且用到了多种复杂表达（可不是单指从句哦）！
精度方面：从有过多的小错误，比如最基础的单复数、过去时态和非谓语（动名词和分词）全部乱了阵脚到放弃用“人称打头”万年烂梗，从而进行被动，倒装，定语从句，同位语从句，虚拟语气运用，这些语法点虽看着陌生，但实际上在口语运用中十分频繁及自然。
4）丰富词汇多样性，合适搭配更加分：
从毫无搭配。简单的主系表结构形容到充满亮点，让整个话题答案都让人舒服，恰到好处让考官不打高分都困难。
✨ 名词词组：travel devotee旅游信徒 extremely exciting极度兴奋 aurora burst极光爆发 a piece of jade一片碧绿
✨ 动词词组：hit the road上路 couldn’t myself from… 无法控制（做某事） popped out突然出现 see… with own eyes亲眼所见 arrange sth…安排（做某事）
此外，作为受地区方言影响，“辅音问题”严重而导致的失分问题如果做出及时训练及调整更会让考官眼前一亮，赢得高分。因此，在雅思口语考试当中考察的项目始终就是那几个点，但如何准备及调整才是很多考生的关键。知己知彼，才能更加百战不殆。
以下是更多雅思口语考生跟着大Ray老师练习及出分案例，希望在雅思考试当中也可以跟你一起赢取“口语高分” 奇迹。不要错过哦..
细致的发音纠正及语法知识梳理
精心筛选的练习材料与课堂设置
是实力与耐心铸就出了更多惊喜成绩
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英国纽卡斯尔大学&澳洲昆士兰大学双硕士学位，雅思口语短期提分大师 ，深谙雅思口语考题流向。
从教多年至今已带领上百名考生赢取雅思口语高分，提分率更是高达94.5%。全年教学“零”差评的她更是深受雅思考生们的喜爱。
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