第一篇英语习作，老师的要求是联系天气变化，写衣着变化
Go to the beach
We go to the beach for our holiday.It's cloudy,I'm wearing a red dress and a pink hat. Mom said,'Don't forget your umbrella.' Then we go out.
Soon after,it's rainy I put on my raincoat and use my mbrella.
Later,it's sunny. I take off my raincoat and the red dress,and I put on my bathingsuit .Then we go swimming in the sea.
It's a nice day!
这是秒秒8岁的第一篇英语习作，据老师评价想象力丰富，场景变化和服装的切换非常合理，是一篇符合孩子乐趣的习作。摒除单词拼写和时态语法的瑕疵，这篇文章逻辑合理，结构明晰，作为第一篇作文实在是佳作。特此记录第一篇作为，鼓励秒秒在英语探索更多收获，谢谢老师的鼓励。
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