「經驗總結」留學文書寫不出?那是因為你完全沒有搞清楚方向

我猜你新建了一個word文檔,乾坐了一個晚上,卻只憋出幾個字?

留學文書PS到底應該怎麼寫?我們又應該注意哪些細節呢?

「經驗總結」留學文書寫不出?那是因為你完全沒有搞清楚方向

為了幫助大家解決留學文書PS寫作難題,百曉生特地為大家整理了這些寫作要點:

1. 抓住主線展開,主題不明確是一大忌。所選的材料必須是與申請人去留學的目的、選擇該項目或者該學校有重要關聯的素材。

2. 對自己的研究方向瞭如指掌,準確清晰地描述自己的研究內容,不要堆積專業名詞或充當“高手”。

3. 一定要按照學校的要求來寫PS,比如字數要求等。PS的字數要儘可能的接近或稍微超過學校的字數要求,在網申時一定要多注意看學校的官方要求。

「經驗總結」留學文書寫不出?那是因為你完全沒有搞清楚方向

4. 針對學校問題回答;每個學校對申請書都會有一些特殊的要求,所以必須有問必答。

5. 不要有表達上的問題,自己要用自己拿手的有把握單詞和句式,千萬不要因為想多樣性,而去多樣性。

6. PS切忌套用模板,好的PS是千錘百煉的結果,是思想的結晶。初稿時可以借鑑別人好的經驗,這是必須也是必要的,但是成型後的PS一點要有自己的特點。

「經驗總結」留學文書寫不出?那是因為你完全沒有搞清楚方向

但是正所謂萬事開頭難,雖然道理我們都懂,但是實際做起來的時候卻還是讓人撓頭……

所以,上面都是虛的,下面才是乾貨!

百曉生帶你一起看看有哪些方法幫你寫好PS開頭!

開門見山法

先點出重點,再依據事件發生順序,將所見所聞寫出。

e.g.

I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field

I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. I am most proud of my testing projects.

引用法

開頭引用各種資料,加以引申,達到吸引讀者,幫助突出中心的作用。

e.g.

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty.

During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.

精闢設喻法

留學ps開頭設喻,以引起讀者對要說明的事物或道理的興趣。

e.g.

“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”

Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.

背景漸入法

引入特殊事件,闡述興趣的起源。

e.g.

As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk.

I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform people''s lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more.

個人陳述開頭引入家庭背景。

e.g

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father’s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments.

This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk.

This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.

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