2019年1月26日雅思寫作範文解析

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01-26 雙邊類大作文社會話題

Some people believethat women should play an equal role as men in a country’ s police force ormilitary force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds ofjobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

題目大意:

有人說女性應該在警察和軍隊中擔任男性一樣的角色,有人說女性不適合這些工作。討論雙邊觀點並給出你的看法。

思路:

雙邊討論類文章,重在解釋甲乙各自觀點的合理性,在這篇文章裡即女性在武裝力量內就職的可行性和不可行性。自己的觀點無需額外的解釋,只在兩者中做出選擇,作為結尾段即可。

審題,找出關鍵詞:

anequal role as men:男女平等(做所有一樣的工作,未必可行,如一些戰鬥崗位有明確身體要求),

policeforce or military force:警察和軍隊(關乎國家安全有關,不同於一般崗位,會有特別要求,女性無法達到)

提綱梳理如下:


2019年1月26日雅思寫作範文解析

MODEL:

Never has the discussion of genderequality ceased in many fields of the society. Now it is over to the militaryand police sectors to face the conflicting view whether women are entitled tothe same opportunities as men. To me, I would support the opinion that womenare not suitable for these positions due to the unforeseeable pitfalls.

Theoretically speaking, it is easyto understand why those feminists assert that women deserve the equal role as theirmale counterparts in armed forces. The first factor that contribute to thisassertion is the computerization in troops and police forces today, meaningthat many tasks are accomplished by recruits who sitting behind computerscreens rather than muscle-bound men in helicopters, a trend that makes itpossible for females to have their role to play. Also, other positions, say, medicalservice, intelligence analysis or supply management, do not have specificphysical thresholds concerning genders.

However, this is not how it looksin the eyes of opponents, who point out that the feminism does not work withall positions in military and police forces, while there exist some potentialproblems. For example, the combat units have stringent entrance requirement,such as strength, body power or endurance, most of which cannot be achieved byfemale members due to their physical disadvantage. Given this, it is notfeasible for women to pass these examinations which are beyond their physicallimit.

Another factor that should not beneglected is the potential maternity leave of female members, which is commonlyseen in ordinary business world but does not work with these special sectors, whichare pivotal to national security. How would a combat crew deal with anemergency with half of its member on parental leave?

In my opinion, although it is thepopular trend that women are playing increasing important role in many aspectsof modern society, it is not the time for all military and police units tocater to such trend when considering its negative impacts.

相關詞彙:

genderequality 性別平等

conflicting 相反的

beentitled to 有權

pitfalls 危害

Theoretically 理論上

Feminists 女權主義者

Assertion 觀點

muscle-boundmen 肌肉男

helicopter 直升機

thresholds 門檻

stringent 嚴格的

feasible 可行的

maternityleave/parental leave 產假

caterto 迎合

相關句型:

It is overto the military and police sectors to face the conflicting view whether

It is easyto understand why

The first factor that contributeto this assertion is

However,this is not how it looks in the eyes of opponents, who point out that

Anotherfactor that should not be neglected is

It is notthe time for

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