雅思大作文如何迅速构建属于自己的框架?

今天和大家聊一聊:如何在完成雅思写作前,迅速地构建提纲。

相信大家经常会遇到这么一类问题:

#平时练习时,经常写着写着忘了自己的观点,发现选择的例子并不合适#、#考试时很紧张,写到一半忘记已经想好的素材#这是因为,我们平时在写作练习中,没有养成写提纲的习惯。有句话叫做:无提纲,不写作。提纲不仅仅帮我们理清行文思路,还能帮我们判断举例是否切题,是否有足够的说服力,完成提纲之后,我们只需要执行就好,能够减少不必要的时间浪费。

接下来以一道大作文真题为例,我们来学习一下如何完成结构清晰的提纲。

雅思大作文如何迅速构建属于自己的框架?

雅思大作文如何迅速构建属于自己的框架?

>>>大作文题目

At the present time, the population in some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

1.判断题目类型,思考应对方式

本题属于利弊分析类,题目问我们:现在,一些国家中青年人的数量多于老年人,这样的情况带来的好处多,还是弊端多?

我们的回答可以是:我认为好处/弊端多(一边倒);我认为好处多,虽然存在弊端,但是可以解决避免or我认为弊端多,虽然存在好处,但是微乎其微(让步+驳论);虽然不否认有弊端,但是我认为好处更多or虽然不否认有优点,但是我认为弊端更多(让步)。


2. 分析一下该采取哪种写法

首先,题目的本质是一个国家里,青年人更多的优势和弊端哪个更多。先思考下优势:

1.更多的青年人意味着更多的劳动力,青年人在各行各业创造着价值,给公司和国家带来了经济收入。也可以这么表达:青年人=劳动力=经济收入。

2.青年人是消费的主力军,尤其是在教育,购房,娱乐消费这一部分,一定程度上促进了就业岗位的增加,促进GDP的增长和社会经济发展。青年人=消费需求=GDP。

基本上两个论点已经基本满足两个主体段的内容了,接下来我们分析一下有哪些弊端。我们会发现,直接说青年人多存在的弊端比较难想,这个时候可以侧面说对老年人有哪些负面影响,也可以支撑观点。比如:

1.青年人变多了,因为他们能提供更优质高效的劳动力,所以很多老年人不得不提前退休,离开岗位, 他们中的很多人会有挫败感,觉得自己丧失价值,不被社会所需要,从而会导致一些心理疾病,影响身心健康。提前退休=挫败感,无事可干=抑郁,心理疾病=危害身心健康。

假使我们想到这里,发现也没有什么思路了,也花了一部分时间,那么根据我们分析的观点, 这篇文章适合写成让步:

青年人多的优点更多,但是不否认有弊端。甚至我们还可以为这些弊端想到一些解决办法,如可以为老年人开设兴趣班,终身学习,或者为社会提供咨询服务等,写成让步+驳论。


3. 整理文章结构

中心思想:

我认为青年人多的优点多于弊端, 即使有弊端,也可以解决。

主体段1:

青年人多的优点1

青年人=劳动力=经济收入。

主体段2:

青年人多的优点2

青年人=消费需求=GDP

让步+驳论段:

青年人多也存在缺点,但是可以解决,反衬优点更加重要。

提前退休=挫败感,无事可干=抑郁,心理疾病=危害身心健康

开设兴趣班;提供咨询服务

结尾点:

总结全文,承认青年人多的弊端,但是可以解决,相比之下没有优点更加重要。

这就是一篇结构脉络比较清晰的提纲了,有中心思想,主体段的分论点,和支撑分论点的细节。


4.范文参考

Due to religious, economical or cultural factors, in some regions or countries, there are no family planning considerations, hence a large sum of young people spring up and take up the majority of the body of population. To my mind, there are more benefits than drawbacks for a nation having more youthful population.

Admittedly, more young adults in a society means more competitive job market and more expensive housing and education, greater body of youth can provide more sufficient source of workforce for the industry, as a result, the social economy could develop more actively. In addition, greater wealth could be produced to meet the needs of people. What’s more, the older citizens can also enjoy more assurance of pensions and retirement welfare and live a carefree senior life. On the country, in a society full of 80s or 90s, the burden of the young to financially support the older compatriots and physically look after them would be tremendous.

Nevertheless, some opponents of younger society may argue that the older folks’ spiritual life quality might suffer if there were more youths, because some elders might be forced to retire earlier and make room for the young, and they might have fewer chances to contribute to their beloved former employer and therefore experience some degree of low sense of self-esteem or even depression. While in my opinion, senior nationals can offset the above awkward scenario by pursuing lifelong learning, providing consulting service to the business world or authoring autobiography to share their precious insights and life stories with other people, giving back to the society and achieving an rewarding older life without feeling gloomy or upset.

In summary, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages in a world with more young adults than older ones. We should encourage people to take into account the huge benefits of a more youthful nation for both the individuals and society and fulfill the ideal of sustainable development in terms of population reproduction while at the same time avoid the downsides of overpopulation or population explosion.


以上就是我们今天关于列提纲确定行文的练习,希望可以帮助到大家!


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