以環保當中“共享單車”為話題。
結構分解
開頭：
1、材料主要講了：These essays above, from different perspectives, mainly talk about the issue of ...
2、通過充分背景信息、可靠數據、深度分析，主要聚焦在什麼問題...，By providing the concrete background Information, reliable statistics and in-deep analysis, these articles focus on...as can be seen in the following.
中間：
1、提出一方觀點：There is no defying the fact that ...This statement must contain some elements of truth at the first glimpse.（乍一看有事實依據）
2、轉折，引出我方觀點:However, it must be pointed out that ...
3、具體行為，支撐觀點：一方面缺乏自律+亂停車；另一方面缺乏公眾意識+無視法規
4、結果產生消極影響：As a result, under a slack supervision system, these activities are bringing many negative influences to...
5、很難維持+好的秩序正在消失
結尾：
1、總結一下，上述現象由內外因共同決定：These factors, internal or external, jointly account for the situation in the essay. This trend, I believe, will still exist in the future.
2、提出解決方案：反饋機制+法律+專家+公眾媒體+個人，多方面採取行動
3、呼籲立即行動： In a sense, It is not why this issue exists in our society, but what should be done to handle it properly.
例文參考：
These essays above, from different perspectives, mainly talk about the issue of shared bikes. By providing the concrete background Information, reliable statistics and in-deep analysis, these articles focus on the disadvantages and benefits of this new kind transport, as can be seen in the following.
There is no defying the fact that shared bikes do bring people many convenience and efficiency in their daily life. This statement must contain some elements of truth at the first glimpse. However, it must be pointed out that they are also bringing some problems which never existed before. For one thing, the bike users are in lack of self-discipline, parking their bikes at random. For another thing, they seldom show the public awareness, disregarding the rules on the city management. As a result, under a slack supervision system, these activities are bringing many negative influences to the convenience for normal citizen’s life. In this situation, traffic jams often break out, especially around the public area during the rush hours. It is very difficult to maintain a clean environment. Gradually, the orderly traffic is vanishing from those cities which have introduced these bicycles.
These factors, internal or external, jointly account for the situation in the essay. This trend, I believe, will still exist in the future. So in the issue of the shared bikes management, it is of essence that the effective feedback mechanism can be set up at the government level. And the relevant departments can make a strict law to punish the irresponsible users who without self-discipline. Meanwhile, the professional suggestions from the researchers should not be ignored: they are more qualified and experienced. As for the mass media, such as TV stations and websites, it is necessary that they launch a campaign so that the cultural awareness could be developed among the public general. The individuals are supposed to learn self-discipline, showing a sense of responsibility in their daily life. In a sense, It is not why this issue exists in our society, but what should be done to handle it properly.
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