Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have negative effect on young people’s writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree?
關於網絡手機電腦的話題考得不少，大家可以嘗試從以下的思路入手：
Agree:
Writing skills:
- 經常寫錯字，用錯符號；frequent use of improper abbreviations and punctuation
- 打字法有自動更正的功能，人們沒有機會獨立思考；many application or soft-ware has the function of self-correction, which means people fail to think independently;
- 很多字都不會寫；as they get accustomed to typing on the phone, which are quite smart to predict what people want to say, young people even do not have to type themselves since the system will provide several choices for them to choose.
- 手機有語音功能和圖片功能，很多溝通都不需要書面表達。sending voice messages， pictures， or emoji be used to express your idea without formal writing.
論證方法：解釋+例子
Reading skills：
- 雖然有人說電腦和網絡使大家有更多信息可以閱讀，但你仔細想想，坐在電腦前面的人有幾個在看文學作品(literature)大多數時候都在看八卦新聞，看奇聞軼事，看優酷土豆，看......選擇問題；
- 另外，自從電腦和手機的出現，人們獲取的信息是碎片化的而非系統的，人們變得對閱讀沒有耐心，稍微長一些的文章都不願意看下去；久而久之，形成了不好的閱讀習慣；
以下給大家範文參考：
Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with this view.
Firstly, the wide use of “internet English” is regarded as the culprit of the declining writing skills. One obvious reason is that young adults may make some grammatical mistakes unconsciously because of the frequent use of improper abbreviations and punctuation on mobile devices, and this might pose a threat to their future career where a professional writing ability is required in most companies. Therefore, manylinguists have expressed their concerns that the instant messaging and chatting on mobile phones might harm the ability of using formal written English.
Secondly， the poor reading proficiency can be put down to the frequent use of technologies as well.Compared to the older generation, young people today are cluttered with different gadgets, like iPad and iPhone. For instance, with easy access to WIFI, they can surf the internet anywhere and anytime to follow the latest information of their idols. However, most social networks deliver fragment and useless information, which not only steals time away from solitary reading but also undermine the ability to think independently.In my opinion, this phenomenon should be reversed as soon as possible becausereading has a profound effect on a nation’s future.
In conclusion, while these electronic devices make thecommunication much more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance negatively.
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