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2010年全国卷I

【作文题目】假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题:人与自然时间:6月15日下午2:00--5:00

地点:501教室

参赛选手:10名

学生联系人:李华(电话44876655)欢迎大家光临

注意:词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;⒉可以适当增加细节,以便行文连贯;⒊答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。

高分秘籍

本篇作文属于典型的邀请信,【2012全国卷二】又再一次考到了这种类型。


  • 在作文开头,使用 It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to be our judge.

(非常荣幸邀请您成为我们的客人。)这种直截了当地礼貌邀请会给改卷老师留下深刻印象;

  • 在作文中间段落,因为题目所给信息较少,高分秘诀就在于“适当增加细节”,比如对举行演讲比赛的目的加以概括,In order to enrich students' life and improve their oral English, 不仅增加了字数,更重要的是,做到了题目要求的增加适当的细节,使文章读起来更加符合逻辑,流畅。
  • 在作文结尾,使用 I am sincerely looking forward to your reply and your presence.

(我真诚地期待您的回复和出席。)这样的套话高端大气,也方便学生背诵,百试百灵。

优秀范文

Dear Ms. Smith,

I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.

I am looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Li Hua



2011年新课标 I

【作文题目】假设你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:

1.本人简介;

2.求助内容;

3.约定时间;

4.你的联系方式(Email:[email protected];phone:12345678)。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。

高分秘籍

这是一篇典型的求助信,2011年的山东卷考的也是同样题型。

  • 在作文开头,使用吸人眼球的“高大上” 句子,I’m writing to seek your assistance in the troubles I’m faced with. (
    我写信来寻求你帮我解决困难。)用assistance 而非help,加上be faced with...这个高分短语,层次立即上去了。
  • 在作文中间,学会变换句式来表达自己的困难是得高分的要点。切忌重复使用 I can't....或者 I have difficulty....,高分的秘诀就在于变换多种句型去说“困难”,让改卷老师不觉得重复和俗套。
  • 在作文结尾,使用 I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice.(如果你可以提供一些建议我会非常感激。)这样落实到了“求助”,这个句子同学们在写求助信的时候可以记住,百搭百用。

优秀范文

Dear Sir / Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: [email protected]; 12345678.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua



2012年新课标 I

【作文题目】假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)

2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)

3. 希望获准。

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

高分秘籍

这是一篇典型的申请信,早在【2006年全国卷II】英文作文就考察的是这种题型,主要想考察学生在真实情景中申请机会,表达自己的能力。

  • 在作文开头,使用I am writing/would like to apply for a chance to ....(我写信来是想申请),简洁明了。
  • 在作文中间,能按照提纲要求,多样化地自我介绍,多样化地描述参加意图,是高分秘籍。说到底,就是要换多种句型去写“我为何要申请”以及“申请给我带来的意义”。有的同学说到自己的能力,只会用 I can ...., 说到意义,反复使用 It is good to..., 这样低级且重复的句型一定要避免,后面我也会说到一些高端句型的写法。另外,千万不能遗漏提纲中的任何一个要点,否则描述再多其他的都无法弥补。
  • 在作文结尾,使用 I’ll be grateful if my application can be approved.(如果我的申请被批准我会非常感激。)这样的句子清晰明了,让改卷老师一目了然,应用文不在于花哨,一定要清晰明了。

优秀范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'lI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua



2013年新课标 I

【作文题目】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:李明:高个子,戴眼镜航班号:CA985到达:8月6日上午11:30

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

高分秘籍

这篇属于典型的求助信,文章的特点是主体内容特别详细,需要你完整准确地传达题干信息即可。高分秘籍在于,对于细节的描述,比如戴眼镜,航班号,这些需要描述准确。不能遗漏任何信息点!


优秀范文

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I've asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you've asked for before.

Also, I'd like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

2014年全国卷(新课标 I)

假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

福利!近十年高考英语全国卷作文真题+史上最走心高分秘籍+范文

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇:住宿--accommodation

高分秘籍

这是一篇典型的询问信,考察学生在真实语境中询问信息的能力。采取图文结合方式的命题,更加贴近实际,也更灵活,得分的第一步是读懂图片。

  • 在作文的开头,使用I am writing for more / further information about....(写信想要咨询关于更多的信息),这种句型简单容易记忆,看起来简单流畅。
  • 在作文中间,高分秘诀在于变换不同句式去“询问”,有的学生分数低,还觉得自己没问题,其实如果重复使用 I want to know..../ I want to ask...看起来重复,累赘,改卷老师立即就没有了兴趣,也摸到了学生的真实水平,不可能给高分。后面,我也会就变化句式给大家讲解,文章篇幅有限,先不赘述了。
  • 在作文结尾,1. I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待你的早日回复),这样简单流畅的句子作为结尾就足够了。

优秀范文

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua


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