不會寫句子,一肚子話表達不出?句子這樣寫作文

我們在寫作文的時候有兩種問題出現:第一是無話可說;第二是一肚子話表達不出來。前面的文章中我們介紹過了無話可說如何操作,今天就告訴大家如何寫出滿意的句子。

我們來看這篇文章:

假設你是李紅,你的一位美國筆友Robert寫E-mail問及你高考後暑假的安排,請根據以下要點,寫一封100詞左右的email回覆他, 可以適當增加細節。

1. 學開車

2. 參加英語培訓課程

3. 去北京看奧運會

4. 遊覽北京的名勝

注意:

1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文,不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。

2.要準確使用語法和詞彙;使用一定的句型、詞彙,清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思;

3. 詞數:100個左右。開頭已給出,不計詞數。


首先,我們對題目信息點進行分析。這些信息點有:1. 我是李紅;2. 美國筆友Robert; 3. E-mail; 4. 學開車;5. 參加英語培訓;6. 看奧運會;7. 遊覽名勝古蹟。

其次,翻譯信息點,添加細節。句子翻譯的過程中,一定要抓住句子成分:主謂賓,主系表。


這裡中翻英三步走:

1,找句子主幹,即主謂賓,主系表。

2,加修飾詞及狀語(地點,時間,方式,原因)。

3,整理句子時態和語態。

比如:

1. 我是李紅。 I am Lihong. 主系表結構。

2.我將在暑假學開車。I learn how to drive.

加上時間地點:I learn how to drive this summer holiday in my hometown.

修改時態和語態:I will learn how to drive this summer holiday in my hometown.


Dear Robert:

  How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.

  That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?

Best wishes!

中翻英三步走,希望能幫助大家進行句子的準確翻譯。如果句子中再加入定語從句等高級句型就更好了!


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