02.27 從“範文”中學什麼？教育頭條網

02.27 從“範文”中學什麼？

2018-02-27 09:25:00 英語週報

好的寫作能力，首先是“讀”出來的。

看一篇好範文，究竟向人家學什麼？單詞人人在背、語法天天在練，為什麼還是寫不好？原因很簡單：背會單詞不等於會用、練對語法不等於用對。

什麼叫做“用單詞”——能組合搭配、能靈活替換。

什麼叫做“用語法”——能用各種語法結構來優化句子。

所以說，看好的範文，至少學三樣東西。

1、句子結構；

2、詞組使用；

3、同義詞變化。

例如下面這篇文章：

Shanghai is an international city which has many magnificent places. I have some advice for your two-day trip. First of all, I highly recommend the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. It is one of the tallest buildings in the world. If you reach the top of it, you can enjoy the view of the city of Shanghai clearly. I am sure you will be attracted by the amazing scenery. Besides you shouldn’t miss Yu Garden when you are in Shanghai. You can learn about the history of Shanghai and taste various local snacks. What’s more, the Bund is a good place which is worth visiting. There you can see buildings of different architectural styles. By the way, the underground is the most convenient in Shanghai. You can travel to almost every place, but you’d better not take an underground during rush hours because it is always very crowded at the time.

一、句子結構的例子：

Shanghai is an international city which has many magnificent places. （定語從句）

What’s more, the Bund is a good place which is worth visiting. （定語從句）

If you reach the top of it, you can enjoy the view of the city of Shanghai clearly.（狀語從句）

Besides you shouldn’t miss Yu Garden when you are in Shanghai. （狀語從句）

I am sure you will be attracted by the amazing scenery. （名詞從句）

You can travel to almost every place, but you’d better not take an underground during rush hours because it is always very crowded at the time. （並列句+從屬句）

注：回顧一下前文推送的“句子結構優化七種武器”。

（1）並列句：防止句子瑣碎、重複用詞。

（2）複合句：三類從句，可以充分體現語法掌握水平。

（3） It句型：防止句子主語單一。

（4） There be句型：描述某種存在，解決中文表達的“無主句”問題。

（5）倒裝句：突出要強調的成分。

（6）分詞：表現多個相關的行為，簡練、主次清晰，有靈動感。

（7）被動語態：突出要表現的重點信息。

就句子結構而言，上面這篇範文在“複雜句”（上面1、2兩個）的使用上，比較突出。

從“範文”中學什麼？