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04-06 雙邊討論類大作文社會話題-城市規劃
Some people believe that the best way to reduce the time to travel to work is replace gardens and parks with apartment buildings, which commuters can live. Others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
題目大意：
有人說減少上班路上時間的最好辦法是拆掉公園，都造白領公寓。其他人反對。雙邊討論並給出觀點。
思路：
對於the best way此類武斷的表達，都選擇反對。即支持乙方觀點，拆公園造公寓，不是減少上班路上時間的最好辦法。
而乙方反對the best的具體理由，題目沒有限定，所以闡述的角度較開放
1）正面反駁：指出這個做法有壞處（不完美）
2）反證法：提出有其他的辦法，並證明其他辦法也能達到同樣效果
審題，找出關鍵詞：
the best way：最好辦法（武斷性表述，選擇反對，但在論證支持者的理由時，應站在支持者的角度，論證其合理性）
reduce the time to traveling to work：減少上班路上的時間（限定了目的，雙反的觀點都應本著這個目標）
replace gardens and parks with apartment buildings：不要公園，都造白領公寓（這一做法的好處VS壞處）
Others disagree：反方觀點，抽象表述（即not the best way，但具體的理由開放，自由發揮的空間大）
提綱梳理如下：
A problem that frustrates working adults is the time wasted on their way to work, with conflicting views on how to tackle this issue. Some people believe that the best solution is to replace the gardens and parks in downtown with apartments,so that working people can live closer to the business center. To me, I do not regard it as a good idea when considering its detrimental effects on environment.
It is easy to understand why this suggestion is crowned as a panacea. Those who harbor this proposal attribute the long travelling hours to the city planning of modern metropolises, where many residential areas are located in suburb, resulting inthe fact that the residents have to spend much time on commuting between home and workplaces. In this respect, if the government demolished public green pacein downtown to accommodate more working population, it would shorten their distance to offices to a large extent.
Plausible though the proposal seems, I would stand by those opponents, who attach more importance to the potential air pollution that will ensue. What is ignored by those opt to remove green land is that it is the trees in those gardens and parks that generate oxygen, absorb greenhouse gas emissions. Were it not for these oases,the air quality of our cities would deteriorate, and the resulting public health problems would far outweigh the superficial convenience in travelling. In response to this, other alternatives need to be taken into consideration. For example, the Internet will have its role to play. With e-communication tools like video conferencing, it is possible for people to deal with business at home rather than punching in every morning in the office.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that removing gardens and parks is not the silver bullet to reduce the commuting time of working people.
相關詞彙：
Frustrate 使受挫
Conflicting 對立的
Downtown 市區
Detrimental 有害的
Panacea 靈丹妙藥
Attribute 歸咎於
Demolish 拆除
Accommodate 提供住宿
Ensue 隨之而來
Oasis 綠洲
Greenhousegas emissions 溫室氣體
Superficial 表面上的
Deteriorate 惡化
Alternative 其他選擇
Punchin 上班打卡
Reiterate 重申
Silverbullet 靈丹妙藥
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